無論是身處學(xué)校還是步入社會(huì)，大家都嘗試過寫作吧，借助寫作也可以提高我們的語(yǔ)言組織能力。相信許多人會(huì)覺得范文很難寫？下面是小編幫大家整理的優(yōu)質(zhì)范文，僅供參考，大家一起來看看吧。

雅思寫作高分表達(dá) 雅思寫作高分集篇一

firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. the old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. if they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.

secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. what is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. when they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.

last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. the situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. in this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.

from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other.

雅思寫作高分表達(dá) 雅思寫作高分集篇二

there has been a worrying trend that children watch an excessive amount of television and do not engage much in active or creative activities. this trend can be ascribed to a number of reasons and it must be addressed by definite actions.

reasons for the trend vary. the primary reason is that children’s television programmes are being broadcast all day with addictive contents, such as vivid and colourful animations. cartoon network and disney channel with their all-day-long series of animation shows are an evident example of this. another clear reason is that parents nowadays are busy with their work, so they want children to focus on an activity that does not require much of their attention such as watching television. these two reasons make children spend more time in front of the television screen; this sedentary lifestyle prevents them from participating in active or creative activities.

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excessive (a): if you describe the amount or level of something as excessive, you disapprove of it because it is more or higher than is necessary or reasonable. example: the government says that local authority spending is excessive.

additive (a): something that is addictive is so enjoyable that it makes you want to do it or have it a lot. example: video movie-making can quickly become addictive.

sedentary (a): someone who has a sedentary lifestyle or job sits down a lot of the time and does not take much exercise. example: obesity and a sedentary lifestyle has been linked with an increased risk of heart disease.

activate (v): if a device or process is activated, something causes it to start working. example: video cameras with night vision can be activated by movement.

parental (a): parental is used to describe something that relates to parents in general, or to one or both of the parents of a particular child. example: medical treatment was sometimes given to children without parental consent.

to appeal to (v): if something appeals to you, you find it attractive or interesting. example: on the other hand, the idea appealed to him.

remedy (n): a remedy is a successful way of dealing with a problem. example: the remedy lies in the hands of the government.

雅思寫作高分表達(dá) 雅思寫作高分集篇三

describe an interesting tourist attraction

you should say

where it is

what you can do there

and explain why you think it is interesting

高分范文：

ok then, well the tourist attraction that i’d like to talk to you about is west lake, which is here in hangzhou. and i apologize if you’ve already heard a lot of other candidates talk about it, but out of all the tourist attractions i know, west lake is the one i’m most familiar with, and i really do think it lives up to its reputation as being one of the most beautiful lakes in china.

but anyway, as for where it is, well as i mentioned just now, it’s here in hangzhou, but to be more specific, it’s actually right in the heart of the city, so um… yeah, it’s very accessible, and also very easy to find. for example, it’s only, like, a five-minute taxi ride from the train station, and you can also get the subway there.

and um… regarding what you can do there, well, a good way to take in all the scenery is to just wander around the lake. and there are also quite a few teahouses dotted around the lake, some more expensive than others, i might add, so if you do go to one, it’s a good idea to take a quick look at the prices before you sit down and make yourself comfortable, otherwise you might be in for a bit of a shock!

what else? um..…. oh yeah, of course, you can go on a boat on the lake, and if it’s your first time there, then it’s something you should definitely do, because i’d say it’s probably the best way to experience the beauty of the lake and its surroundings.

so yeah, it’s a really interesting place to visit, and if you haven’t been there yet, you should definitely go if you ever have the chance!

雅思寫作高分表達(dá) 雅思寫作高分集篇四

successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. （2018年11月真題）

as a result of content media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.

many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. however, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. so the notion of "fairness" is not the issue.

those who feel that sports stars are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. the pressure from the the media is intense and there is little privacy out the the spotlight. so all of these factors may justify the huge earnings.

personally, i think that the amount of money such sports stars is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professional and achievements.

保佑大家考試過過過！！！！

超級(jí)學(xué)長(zhǎng)老師又為大家更新了后半部分，關(guān)于寫作的一些方法，注意事項(xiàng)，還有寫作核心詞匯送給大家（寫作考點(diǎn)詞背這個(gè)就夠了）

01單詞很重要，背誦要區(qū)分

首先，寫作過程中，對(duì)單詞的拼寫要求很高。詞匯方面，我們分為兩大塊，一塊是基礎(chǔ)詞匯。雅思寫作對(duì)單詞量的要求在4000-6000左右，換句話說考生掌握了相當(dāng)于大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)或以上的詞匯水平，就足以應(yīng)對(duì)雅思寫作考試了。對(duì)于寫作詞匯而言，量只是一個(gè)最基礎(chǔ)的需求，不要盲目地背誦單詞，更多的要關(guān)注詞的應(yīng)用，比如詞組的搭配、詞性的辨別和詞意的辨析等，為以后寫出正確的句子打好基礎(chǔ)。

第二塊，我們要同時(shí)背誦寫作專有詞匯，大作文背誦相關(guān)場(chǎng)景詞匯，比如， 教育類，科技類， 文化類所必須的高分詞匯；小作文背誦曲線圖上升下降，不變，餅圖題可以背誦比例，占比等常用的詞匯。這些寫作專有詞匯良好的掌握后，會(huì)讓我們的寫作更專業(yè)。

02語(yǔ)法句式要掌握 要學(xué)會(huì)靈活運(yùn)用

考生們要注意，語(yǔ)法好是寫作會(huì)變好的一個(gè)前提，但并不是會(huì)讓寫作拿高分的必要因素，句型多樣化的靈活運(yùn)用更為重要。好的句子是好文章的基礎(chǔ)，考生要保證句子的準(zhǔn)確性，靈活運(yùn)用句子的多樣化。基礎(chǔ)薄弱的考生一定要練習(xí)寫出正確無誤的句子，在此基礎(chǔ)上，嘗試不同句式結(jié)構(gòu)的替換。多多背誦一些與雅思寫作相關(guān)的句子，這樣在以后的雅思寫作中才能熟練地用英文表達(dá)出自己的想法和觀點(diǎn)。基礎(chǔ)較好的考生，要注意句子的靈活運(yùn)用，不要簡(jiǎn)單的認(rèn)為寫長(zhǎng)句就能拿高分，用復(fù)雜句就能拿高分。

03掌握連接詞是學(xué)習(xí)的一大重點(diǎn)

這是一個(gè)穿針引線的過程，給位考生一定要弄清楚所用連接詞的意思和作用。方法可以看相關(guān)的例句或者范文，也可以看一些適合自己的英文文章。很多情況下，考生用了一個(gè)表示轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯關(guān)系的詞語(yǔ)，但是前后語(yǔ)句的語(yǔ)義關(guān)系卻看不出有轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，在練習(xí)初期，可以把相同話題的句子用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞按合理的邏輯關(guān)系串聯(lián)起來。

建議考生可以參照類似話題的范文研究和學(xué)習(xí)其中觀點(diǎn)句和連接詞的運(yùn)用，此外，對(duì)于語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，復(fù)合句的內(nèi)容，可以進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)，復(fù)合句前后用并列連詞或者連接副詞連接，而這些連接詞的邏輯功能，是我們學(xué)習(xí)的重點(diǎn)。

04預(yù)測(cè)考題方向你也可以

隨時(shí)關(guān)注寫作考題方向的變化，有目標(biāo)、有重點(diǎn)的針對(duì)重要話題進(jìn)行分析和考前練習(xí)，并對(duì)自己寫的文章進(jìn)行再次推敲和修改。

05最后

很多初期學(xué)習(xí)雅思寫作的學(xué)生，對(duì)于大作文話題題目，一下子想不起三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)來論證自己的立場(chǎng)，觀點(diǎn)不夠鮮明。這是我們努力的一個(gè)很重要的方向。各位同學(xué)可以把大作文分為不同的背景話題，每一類話題，如教育類，都有它常考的問題，提前進(jìn)行匯總總結(jié)，這樣考場(chǎng)上，就可以不慌亂。

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雅思寫作高分表達(dá) 雅思寫作高分集篇五

describe an experience when you spent time with a child.

you should say:

what you did

when and you did

and explain how you felt

one of my best friends has a 3-year-old baby girl; so every time we went out, she would take her with us.

her little girl is such a witty kid, and she is always full of energy. as she begins to be aware of the outside world, she asks a lot of questions just to satisfy her curiosity.

it happened one day when we went out shopping. while her mother and i took turns trying clothes on, she was sitting quietly on the bench. then she looked at me and her mother and started to express her opinions on our clothes.

the way she talked was so funny that we couldnt stop laughing. she was so used to playing with her barbie doll that she suggested we should dress like one of her dolls.

she even taught us how to walk like models because she thought that was pretty.

all the customers who walked in the store noticed her, even the store owner couldnt stop laughing at her since she was still a baby girl, but she talked and acted like a grown-up.

that was probably the best part of the shopping trip that i will never forget.